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Stone Angel

A stone faced angel weeps
As dark, looming clouds
Chase away the moon.

Flashes of light from the sky
Reflected in her cold eyes
Illuminate the night.

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This poem may or may not be finished. I just wrote it about 15 minutes ago, so I'd appreciate comments on whether I should continue it or leave it as is. <3 (Anyone else notice I really love writing about storms?)

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  • parenchma
    July 21

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    I like it a lot. Let it sit... think about it. What does a stone angel do? Who is nearby? And when it rains, you can no longer see her tears...


  • darkdreamer1
    March 27
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    This is awesome you should totally finish it though I love you bye


  • astrologicalzodiac
    March 27
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    this is an awesome poem! i do think it could be a little longer. other than that, amazing start.