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Winter.

My winter,
my sweet vanilla cold.
The cinnamon of the season.
Red-faced amazement.

Bring back my winter.

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  • mgmc gold member
    November 20
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    Short and very expressive. I like the use of spices--adds another dimension. Creative interpretation of the prompt! Thanks for your entry and all the best!


  • Heva Feva
    October 15

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    This is so cool! I really like this bit:
    "my sweet vanilla cold.
    The cinnamon of the season"

    Thank you so much for entering my contest, I love your poem! Good luck...
    -heva


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    July 16

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    For it to be so short, the description was phenominal! I could actually see someone playing in the snow as their face would be beat red from the tempature (as they didn't care as long as they were outside having fun). I want to thank you for your entry into the following contest: "To Be Put On My Favorites List."

    Ted E

    PS: Your entry has been blessed by the three wise clappers, but don't spend the whole nine points in one place(lol)!


  • T.o.r.t.u.r.e. gold member
    June 7

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    the imagery in this poem is very good. It could stand to be a bit longer but its still a good poem either way. thank you for entering and good luck in my contest


  • etoile
    June 2

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    I really like the imagery, I wish it was slightly longer. either way this was nicely written. the colours in this are very pretty.

    thanks for entering

  • abmsem
    April 19
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    Such a short poem, yet not a single word out of place. Thank you for your entry and good luck


  • Brokenshardsofglass
    April 7

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    great to be so short so nothing much to fix without fixing thewhole thing lolz jk loved it wish we got snow


  • ItaloEtkin
    April 7
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    hahha i love winter! but here in texas it's not the same.


  • InsanityisAmusing
    April 2

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    I love how your poem is written. Its very descriptive and they go well together, thanks for entering my contest and good luck!


  • whiterabbit.
    March 29

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    I love how beautifully written this is. The descriptions are amazing and fit perfectly. Great write and thanks for entering.
    xx


  • Umi Juvariel
    March 25

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    I love it when people compare winter and vanilla. Those two just go together because of snow cream. I love snow cream. I love this poem. Maybe they go together too? Excellent write and good luck in my contest.

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