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Blindness

Awaking with the alarm beeping
I stumble bumping my head
Looking around as I could see
There were no colours to be
No shapes
Nothing.

Panic spread through out my body
Franticly searching for anything
Then I came to remember
There was a crash
And there was glass shards all around
The pain came back as well
That the fact was
That I could no longer see
No longer could be me.

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...if you lost your sight?

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  • LovelyLauren
    March 25

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    excellent and emotional take on the prompt. thank you so much for entering.

    Lauren


  • iamthebeatles
    March 24
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    Creepy. It's frightening to know that the human body is so fragile. Great piece.

    cassie