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What Then?

Small talk and walking together
Laughs but not much more
Who are we to say
It hasn't been done before?

Are we on our way to the beginning?
Or has this friendship come to an end?
A paradox with no solution?
A simple math problem, solve for n?

I shy away, are you shy too?
Please tell me before I tell you
If I speak, I'll break again
And what then?

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  • FallingRainDrop
    March 24

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    this is really great. i love the rythem to it. "a paradox with no solution? A simple math problem, solve for n?" those lines were really creative. loving your work!!! :]


    • My Frozen Heart
      March 24
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      thanks! yeah, those are my two fav. lines that i wrote. i might be editing this at some point when i can think of how to make it better though. thank u =)