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I Want To Lay Near The Ocean

With just my husband and I
I would love to take a long walk
upon the sandy beach
where there is no one

just us and the island itself
and the bright sun
holding each others hands
would make my heart fly

I want to look into his eyes
where we would not have to talk
at the end of the day

I want to lay upon the sand with him
as we watch the sunsets down
when the moon comes out
I just want to make love throughout the night

straight under the full moon
where I can get wild
near the beautiful ocean

that is what I want to do with my husband
and I want it to last forever.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    March 27

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    That is wonderful.. and I hope you get your wish to come true. For this was beautiful and felt like it was spoken from the heart.