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Revenge on cancer

You wore the gown of fortune
You wore the crown of gold
You set those eyes on fire
Their hearts you controlled

Those endless, dark funerals
Those hated, stressful days
Those broken, flooded hearts
That your tongue rakes a blaze

You caught a stranded angel
She owned a robe of white
She wore a mask of love
When her heart rose so bright

She was a flower in a field
A leaf so wild and pink
She lured the school boys
With a tiny little wink

Now she has lifted her soul
And fought a brave fight
She won i tell you
Can't you see the light

She won her battle, she won her game
Heather the angel, that was her name

Author notes

Heather, you are well missed in this world
You have many great friends
They love you and miss you very much
May you rest in peace

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  • thank you for supportig heather. she remains i our hearts till the day we die. thanks for entering
    ---mary---

  • a beautiful tribute here, the darkness it begins with peters out to the brave outcome, this is a well told tale, one i can identify with, after loosingmy young son to cancer its a demon
    abigail


  • SimplyNoodle
    March 25

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    Awh hun this is wonderful, You captured such a wonderful image here. May god bless your heart. Good luck in the contest.
    ~ Chelsey