We are not the pawns of fate,
for what we plant we will harvest,
evil is as evil does,
and only good will bring
the kiss of rebirth.
A contest entry
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Comments
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Congrats are in order.
The first two lines are exemplary in the description of taking responsibility for our actions. It is an fresh and interesting way to look at the concept, one that has been done over. Your word choices are well done and the line breaks are near perfect to guide the reader.
I enjoyed this poem immensely, thanks for sharing.
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We do indeed reap what we sow. And a stitch in time saves nine for sure. Profoundness in this short verse Poetess.
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very Hindu of you... Very good!
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Nicely penned.
I loves the flow.
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