Kaleidoscopic executioners
astound with sharp
remarks about the
marred practice of their
abominable careers.
K-otic hate gleams
intensely through
sharp pupils behind
silent eyes of the
executing body,
slowly hell appears.
A contest entry
- This Quickie Is Mysteriously Brought To You By The Letter K by Cerulean Sunrise.
485 points, ended March 24, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Very twisted, and so very capturing! I really do enjoy reading this poem, the choises of words are stunning and makes the poem so more special!
Good luck.
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Hmmm, some confusing but interesting imagery presented here. Nicely expressed.
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Wow. This was so 'cool' ....uhm amazing. (cool sounds lame) but I can definately see why you got gold. Well done!
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Marvelous write!
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scary good!
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Great work here and good luck!
Jeremy0826
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