laying over the toilet
perspiring at the temples
acid burning at my throat
curled in a ball
pain clenching my stomach
doubled over on the floor
thoughts running through my mind
wanting to fade into perfection
obsessed with appearance
not caring about the consequences
wanting love
wanting happiness
this is the key...
this untreatable disease
A contest entry
- Prewrites Contest by tears.of.silence.
1000 points, ended April 18, 401 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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well this was very descriptive and i liked the way you wrote it. You've got 6 poems in the contest. I will be dividing your points up amongst them. This poem has received a 15. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you. Kahy
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Been There Done That
Ohhhhhhhhhh to have a Diss-Ease that causes disease of this type is yukypuk for sure - and at 72 I run into times of not caring - been there done that - happiness is afar of - but these type of diss-eases are treatable - with help from God if it is a spiritual diss-ease - bieng truely loved is a key to happiness and happiness the key to ease. Bless God - Joe - k
(keep on keeping on)
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Thank you =) I really appreciate this comment!!! =D
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Nic Pic - Loverly
You are most welcome - (;-))==>
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Amazing
I can relate a lot to this, it really speakes to me. Great poem. -
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Thanks. Sometimes it's really difficult putting yourself out there like this. It can be scary letting complete strangers into your world and giving them that chance to judge you. But knowing there are others out there suffering the way I am...it kind of lightens the load and makes me feel better about putting my life on paper. So, thank you =)
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