Silent tears
Broken and hurting
Confrontational fears
Leave everything turning
Spinning hard and fast
Paralyzed by the burn
Wishing for the past
But I will learn
Ears ringing
Hands try to push it out
Perspective veering
Another building shout
Holding on to control
Loosing any moment now
Won't expose my soul
Too afraid to disavow
Author notes
If you have any ideas as to continue this song (yes, it's a song), please write me..
I need a chorus, and can't seem to write it 
Write whatever you want.. but write me something?
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Love it! great job, beautiful flow for a song!:]
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Great Poem- just wish you wrote more.
My writing can relate to yours which is why I like it. You use allot more high class vocab, but I love this piece. It never hurts to get creative with it, backgrounds do help with the visual appeal. But all in all I believe its beautiully wrote.
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I wrote another verse, I'd be happy to hear what you think of it
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this is really amazing. short but it still leaves an impact which is always good. i love "confrontational fears" very good hun!
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I wrote another verse, I'd be happy to hear what you think of it
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girl you know how to write the good stuff! i really enjoyed the 2nd verse! i really like "won't expose my soul, too afraid to disavow" great work :]
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