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Seductress

Seducing eyes are calling me
Your body is exciting me

Lustful thoughts torture me
Deviant without a word

Your body pressed against the wall
Hands fluttering in your lap

Mind reader
You lick your lips

Taunting me
Daring me

A finger down your
Neck, your breast

Your black corset swells
As you release a silent moan

Are we watched you and I?
Tension so thick, a metallic taste

You walk to a secluded room
Your sent follows behind

Seductress my mistress
Taunting little lies

I follow you to
Our  Den of Inequity

You lock the door
Behind

My Sunday shirt is on the floor
My hands up you skirt

Mind blowing your caresses
Agonizing pleasure when you tease

My pants you remove slowly
Your large eyes on mine

You look so innocent
On your knees

The lover's kiss you
Grant me makes me want to scream

I push you onto the carpet
I push up your skirt

I kiss and lick and nibble
Until Your juices fill my mouth

Then I slide gently inside you
Binding you to the ground

Ecstasy beyond measure
You tight on me

At last I release inside you
Ecstasy explodes in those Seductress eyes

Author notes

Kinda a little fantasy of mine though I would be the girl of course lol

3. Play me like you play your violin.

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  • Of course

    Such a shame--to always want to be the girl????? This is seductive at it's best--As a lesbian trapped in a mans body LOL---- I can relate

  • I'm told that I'm like this.
    But I don't know...


  • Grozny silver member
    April 15

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    Very good!

    Firs time I've seen a girl do erotica from the guy's point of view! You pretty much hit that nail on the head.

    BTW "scent" not "sent"

  • hi


  • Reanna Eryn
    March 24
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    Wow. Just. wow.


  • Rainbow7
    March 24

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    My Sunday shirt is on the floor
    My hands up your skirt

    My pants you remove slowly
    Your large eyes on mine

    I push you on to the carpet
    I push up your skirt

    Wow...wow...wow!
    You and me?
    lol


  • hisaddiction
    March 24
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    leave it alone, holy shit am I blushing......wow..WOW!

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