I may say, you make me feel brand-new.
I may say, you bring out the best in me just you.
I may say, I do apprieciate you.
I may say, the sky is a deep gray without you
I might even say, I'll love you till the end of every day
..........I May!
A contest entry
- ~~Offer me your love -- I've given u mine~~(Prewrites allowed) by sweet innocence.
550 points, ended May 16, 49 entries
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I like the idea behind this, but not so much the execution of it. It seems a little forced. That may be because I'm not a huge fan of rhyming, at least not every line. Thanks for entering though and good luck.
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Hmmm, nice poem, well thought out if it were a poem written for someone special. This contest is more for how well you know me by my profile, and it really doesn't say.
I did say prewrites were allowed, so that's Ok, I just wanted something a bit more descriptive of who you think I am, based on my profile page.
Good luck in my contest! And thank you for entering. It has been fun reading what others think! -
I loved the repetition of I MAY SAY!!
NICE POEM...
THANKS FOR ENTERING MY CONTEST
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