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Reaching

Walking along side a pool
Getting ready to swim
Sets his towel down
Kicks off his shoes
Steps to the side of the pool
Bending his knees
Curving his elbows
Standing on his toes
Jumping into the deep pool
Pain grabs at his back
Slices  down  spine
Cries out in agony
Falling to the bottom of the pool
Water quickly turns red
As he slowly sinks down
A soft landing on the floor
Lying on the bottom of the pool
He gasps for his last breath
Only to find chilly water
Now he lays half-dead
Slipping unconscious in the pool
He reaches for the light
Prays God will have mercy
And take him to heaven

Author notes

inspired from a picture that belongs to power-of-one. it can be found at this address; http://the-power-of-one.deviantart.com/art/Your-other-side-113616011

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  • Black-Fang
    March 25
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    wow, thats really creepy!

    thanks for entering