(A)nother
(c)rime
(c)ommitted
(u)nder
(s)trange conditions
(a)nother
(t)ime someone was
(i)n danger
(o)r under suspicion
(n)o one yet arrested.
Author notes
well I tried
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Comments
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Acrostics are such fun poems to create and you did a great job with this one. The imagery is wonderful.
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Wow nice acrostic. I really liked the truth in this. Such emotions in so few words. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
josh
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Insightful and a delight to read. You do well with acrostics.
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This is really creative! Great work!
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thanks my first attempt
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Really good one. You did very well!
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thanks I had never tried to write one before.
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great acrostic. I admire people that can do this style well.
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It was my first attempt guess I was lucky
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I like this one. I like the creativity of it and I like that it's an acrostic. I love acrostics. Accusation is a bad thing sometimes, but if you are quite sure it's them it's always safer to accuse and hold, than to let go and allow further crimes to take place.
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thanks for commenting glad you liked my first attempt at this form
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You have the comment "well I tried" I guess that this one didn't do it for me as they say that maybe I am not a fan of acrostics anyway. Sorry.
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hey no problem. I was all that sure about it either. Not what I am used to writing at all.
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This is wonderful, you should make more.
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thanks for saying that I was worried it wasn't any good. I have never tried to write one before.
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A TREKKER! A TREKKER! -glomps- Hi!
-shakes self- Anyway.
This is a very shiny poem. I like it muchly, with muchness and joy. -gives candy- -
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trekker as in star trek. Are you into star trek? And thanks for commenting on poem
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I know what trekkers are. I would have said trekkie 'cause I like that term more, but you called yourself a trekker so there we go. -shrug- Anyway. Yeah, I love it. I don't watch it so much anymore because I can never find it on tele nowadays (The one channel that played it regularly suddenly decided to replace it with CSI... stupid people), but I still love it.
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The reason I replied like that was the other day I had someone ask me what kind of journey I was on... I went what? hehehe. Anyway, I love classic star trek and I watch it whenever I want to because I have the episodes on DVD now. And I love the books as well. Sometime if you want we can discuss the show/movies/characters. I am familiar with all of them somewhat even though the classic is my favorite.
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Rofls! Wow.
I like it in all the forms I have seen (which is everything except the movies and the books), but I have to say that TNG is closest to my heart. I never properly saw a lot of the original series, though... the only place I ever see it is on PBS and they don't do it in order. -is irked- Or maybe they do, but they're just hiding it from me, like when they show old Doctor Who. (I know they still play it, but I only caught it once. Grrs.)
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clever hon, I have never seen this an acrostic done like this...thanks I like it
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first one I tried
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A clever acrostic
well done hun and best wishes in the contest
Julie
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thanks
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very well done and an accurate description of the word too. Hope you win.
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thanks I won bronze which was a surprise to me
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Wow, I absolutely love this acrostic!
Brilliant job with the prompt! Bravo!
♥ Kate
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smiling big time
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