deceptive thoughts penetrate pure
ivory moons dissolve, transparent hallucinations
bottomless ecstasy
trembling movement arouses fantasy,
sheltered regions climax.
renewal of sensuality
hunger
delicate flesh quivers
temporal experience nourishes essences
murmur neurotic silences convincingly
exhilaration
A contest entry
- Join in this Unique Contest! You'll love it! by redbarchettadrive.
550 points, ended March 28, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'm losing it again...
Comments
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Beautiful
This poem is as beautiful as it is sensual. I love it. No other things to say.
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wow.
my beginner poems are so inadequite to this.
i read this like 5 times lol -
wow. this is really good. your poetry is really good. i didnt expect something so great from a man with the audacity to name himself after a god, but you impressed me. good job. thats not easily done
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(bows and smiles)
By recomendation of my Lord I have partaken in your most wonderful poem. And it was truly piece worth reading. Your work is inspiring and always very well penned.
(grins and stands once more)
The flow words well and the set up is even better. Very admireable. Congratulation on your winning of a trophy. It was well deserved.
~Sera
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(claps; halted and ominous)
Lord Anu; Great Pharoah of the Omniverse....
(bows low and averts his jaded, crimson gaze)
...this is the first of your writes that I have had the exquisite pleasure
of reading, sir.
(remains in his uncommonly respectful stance)
...you have managed; with great charm and dexterity, I might add; to
most intelligently veil a raunchy union and compose in such a way that
even a girl-guide could experience it without blushing.
(grins like the devil he is)
...I assure you, sir that I will return for more of your highly thoughtful
and painstakingly written treasures.
Add me, you bastard!
(smirks; with the ruthless strings of malice pulling at his parched, ashen lips)
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Nice choice of words Anubis.
well done
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Amazing. You can't teach that. Your naturely brillant. Keep writing.
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I don't often like erotica - but this is incredible. I am not even sure how to express what I want to say. The words draw such a sensual experience, it is breathtaking.
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wonderful stuff, congrats on the bronze.
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Um wow...
lol i liked it.
I found that really hot.
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wonderful piece.
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My My Mate ...
Grand , Truly Grand ! It brings to mind some of the greatest bits of essence in two becoming one ...I love it !
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so absorbing, I can feel it
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oh my goodness X3 
Well written, Nubis XD
Yer so talented >.<
"deceptive thoughts penetrate pure
ivory moons dissolve, transparent hallucinations
bottomless ecstasy"
nuff said
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