I'm sick of him, sick of his lies
Sick of the half-hearted bullshit disguise.
You talk about life long passion and love
but the way I see it, it's lack thereof
There you are in that room, in that bed, with that whore
What's worse is we have been in this position before
You said that you loved me, you said you were mine
You said this with a passion uncountably divine
yet your flings with these women happen day by day
and the sadness it causes me will not go away
I was in love, I stood in the palm of your hand
every desire was my simple command
too much to ask? for you to be true?
your whores a plenty sent my life a skew.
Your words were a knife held to my skin
your actions were a thrust forcing it in.
now I lie bleeding crumpled on the floor
and still I moan, "I love you, Forever more"
revisions?
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exactly how it is with my bf


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Im very sorry to hear that!
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wats yo real name i lyk dis it nice an very touching
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wow really sad but understandable

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No need to change this one. I can really understand this one. I have been cheated on before and it hurts as bad as them ripping your heart out and setting it ablaze... Great write


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wow
.....depressing... well verty well written it must take courage to post . This poem reminds me of my own encounter.
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