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Sick Of Him

I'm sick of him, sick of his lies
Sick of the half-hearted bullshit disguise.

You talk about life long passion and love
but the way I see it, it's lack thereof

There you are in that room, in that bed, with that whore
What's worse is we have been in this position before

You said that you loved me, you said you were mine
You said this with a passion uncountably divine

yet your flings with these women happen day by day
and the sadness it causes me will not go away

I was in love, I stood in the palm of your hand
every desire was my simple command

too much to ask? for you to be true?
your whores a plenty sent my life a skew.

Your words were a knife held to my skin
your actions were a thrust forcing it in.

now I lie bleeding crumpled on the floor
and still I moan, "I love you, Forever more"

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  • exactly how it is with my bf

  • shayshayboo
    March 25
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    wats yo real name i lyk dis it nice an very touching


  • babigurl613
    March 25
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    wow really sad but understandable


  • HeartBr8ker
    March 24

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    No need to change this one. I can really understand this one. I have been cheated on before and it hurts as bad as them ripping your heart out and setting it ablaze... Great write


  • RenyJameel
    March 24
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    wow

    .....depressing... well verty well written it must take courage to post . This poem reminds me of my own encounter.

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