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Bad Boy

When I met you
You were so bad ass
I was in love with that.
Liked that you were so
Unpredictable.

Felt that my love
Could tame you.
Bad boy gone good
Just for your girl.
I was the only one
Who could claim you.

Suddenly I find
That the intial attraction
Is no longer there.
You're always in my space
All in my face.
I miss the way you used to be.

Remember?
Bad.

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Bad girl.

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  • Truly wonderfully expressed. It is true most of us women want the bad boy side, but only when we are in the mood. I have found myself that way at times. Loved this piece.

  • It seems to me, and perhaps it's just because I am a guy. That every girl wants that guy who is unpredictable to begin with. But never wants to deal with him all the time... being unpredictable and dangerous are two different things and many walk the line. Be careful. Wonderful Job writing this.
    I'm also 90% positive I've never read a poem with the word "bad" at the end. thanks for writing