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Dove

 
 
white dove --
the sound of a shadow
crossing the street

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  • maa gold member
    March 30
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    just amazing ...
    I have been missing your classes lately ...

    maa


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    March 27

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    this is beautiful... how marvelous this emblem of peace and purity to bear a silent, but certain approaching sound! I love that! To take the tangible and encompass the intangible like this is just captivating. REally loved this!


  • Naughtygrlred
    March 26
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    So beautiful as always


  • funpum
    March 24
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    Lovely.


  • Peteskid gold member
    March 24

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    I am reminded how in epic films, conquerors came with trumpets and drums, but this seems to me is the opposite...PK


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    March 24

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    "the sound of a shadow" I love that! great haiku!! it's beautiful



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