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Mr. Smith part 2

you make me feel slippery
lust flowing between my thighs
like candy...
sticky, sweet

Am I still your whore?
Show me..

Hold me down hard
tell me
tell me now
tell me I'm yours

pull my thighs open
put your hands up my shirt
rip off my panties

Give it to me
I've been such a bad girl
I could use a spanking

Show me
Let me be your puppet
Bind me by these strings

Tell me what a bad little girl I am
and I deserve whats coming to me

Hard..really hard..

Cover my mouth..and take what's yours
And I swear to you
I will be a bad girl for you again


I'll always be your whore....

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  • mcfreeman
    August 1
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    a winner

    ....admission is good for the soul


  • Fox.
    April 15

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    holy fuck! god damn, i don't know if its the words from your lips or the lips themselves but. damn! wtf, you're killing me!


  • Budart
    April 2

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    Hot!!!

    I have read several of your pieces and like your clear concise style. I general I think erotic art is more pornography than art but you do it very well. Got me goin! Thanks


  • Love-EroticPoet
    March 29

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    My head moves to the loud throbbing coming from inside my pants.
    Leave you readers in a mental yearning state

  • MistressVi
    March 28

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    very well spoken, written to make one believe and actually visualize what has been written. I love it.


  • Injury
    March 27

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    sex sells, but it's not act described in these that gets me interested, it's the beautiful way you put the words together to make it sound passionate


  • wipexawayxyourxtear
    March 27

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    I'm speechless. This is very visual and I like your details. Keep writing


  • Calvin Therapy
    March 26
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    i like the spider web wall paper

    this inspires me


  • Mistress Leala silver member
    March 25
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    Wow, very powerful and lustful write. Nicely penned.


  • spideracer gold member
    March 25

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    Wow! you are a dirty girl, and I love it. Another fine write, yes you can cum stay at my place anytime. well written and thanks for sharing.


  • white stone
    March 24

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    Yum


  • Reanna Eryn
    March 24
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    I love this, very hardcore.


  • Phallen
    March 24
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    this is my favorite poem ever! i love it...looooooovvveee it

  • J Macabre gold member
    March 24
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    This is good enough to win i think.
    Thoughts don't get any more raw then that! lol
    Best of luck.


  • Night Terrors
    March 24
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    lol aren't you a dirty girl I'd spank you


  • blaqangel01
    March 24
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    wow


  • Minstrel-Morose
    March 24

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    wow

    Actually, I think it's maniacal, demonic and strangely beautiful in its perverse topic. I actually really like it, and I congratulate you on your bravery writing something like this.


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    March 24
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    you have the best mind ever...
    so fucking kinky and dirty..love every bit of it

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