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Lost in Translation

I know I'm a bitch
I know I'm a whore
I know I'm pathetic
I'm broken
You tore me up
Till I could take no more
I want to die
I'm a hopeless case
The biggest bitch in the world
Hated by all
I try to laugh it off
And bury it forever
But it's surfacing again.
I try to be happy
Faking a smile
I can no longer act for you
I'm falling apart
Wondering what to do
Lost in translation

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This is just about random crap that doesn't matter.
Written March 1st, 2004

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  • Sunset
    March 5, 2004
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    Oh shush up, that is a total lie.
    -Sunset

  • Sunset
    March 1, 2004
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    Yes I am. This one was from everything people have called me or said to my face.

    Thank you for the comment, I appreciate it.

    I also appreciate all of the help you have given me. That means a lot.
    -Sunset


  • Sunset
    March 1, 2004
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    You'd never be anything close to a bastard or a man whore.

    Haha, thank you for the comment.
    -Sunset

  • TheFallen
    March 1, 2004
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    Sunset...you cannot blam yourself for what others have done to you, you are not the person you described above, you just arent...have confidence in yourself and things will get better. email me or IM me and tell me how things went today. good luck and hope everything gets better for you

  • Sunset
    February 29, 2004
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    *lifts your head up* You really need to stop being sorry It's my fault, stop worrying about it.

    Thank you for your comment.

    It's nice to know you're willing to listen to all of my worthless blabber.

    I'm here for you too.
    -Sunset

  • a quiet dreamer
    February 29, 2004
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    greatness

    *looks down* you know im not ever gonan give up on you. im not mad.. im sorry i cant make you feel better. im so sorry you feel this way, and it does too matetr so dont say it doesnt. i wanna help..you're not anything you said above tho, not to me

    as far as the poem my dear, a lot more angst. and agression. you seemed a bit more frustrated and fed up with life, a nice tone, very emotional. you know, I am a huge fan of your writing. thanks for sharing hun

    if you need to talk, talk. you knwo i care and i want to help, i'll gladly listen. ok? *hugs you tight* i wish you felt better

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