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Looking up to you

Kissing you,

All over.

Stopping.

Pulling on your belt

Feeling you with my hands,

Oh yeah..you feel good.

There's a certain satisfaction in pain.

I only hurt the ones I love,

Would you like to be hurt?

I promise you... I'll kiss it better.

Do my lips turn you on?

Can I taste you?

I know you want me

I wont hurt you....

Well maybe

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  • RockSteady
    August 12

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    pls do

    very playful indeed. and yes you may, if you need. theres one thing I must say, I cant wait for that very day. ....Well maybe, for reals tho I like it . It made me feel funny ...... not funny........ oh hell I dont know. now look what you've done to me! shoot thats right you cant see me
    Nice pen luv. I think I shall read on

  • Humm..I can feel what you are to taste..indeed a sweet taste you shared with your sweet write..well done indeed...melodious work you did...

  • I love your new picture! You are a gorgeous poet in what you say and your look. I think that this is a cry for the same thing that I can completely understand. My favorite was the "I promise". You are a white tiger and I only read shit that's worth it.

  • mcfreeman
    August 1
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    here's...

    looking at you, kid

  • Ms. Ele
    August 1
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    I'm really liking your work.

  • hummm...very interesting...i like it! lol


  • glenn shannon silver member
    April 21
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    You a a tease brilliant clean and fasinating !

  • Very playful and well written. I liked this one as well.

  • This was truly a very playful piece. I enjoyed it all especially 'well maybe'

  • haha that last line really adds something! i really like the whole thing. it is really seductive and blunt at the same time. good job!


  • white stone
    March 24
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    Scorchingly direct and honest.


  • Rainbow7
    March 24
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    I only hurt the ones I love
    Would you like to be hurt?
    What a sweet offer!
    I go for it..


  • Phallen
    March 24
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    i am blushing! all red in the face..hot in here?


  • Night Terrors
    March 24
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    lol that's really hot do you like girls too by any chance

  • J Macabre
    March 23

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    Hm pretty red hot piece.
    Definitely worthy of being called erotica.
    I like how you went about it though...you weren't filthy with it...congrats on that one.

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