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Impetuous Headliner

Push beyond royal treatment
see it's discarded streets

String of misleads
for it's goal
wool over to entice
his imperial life

 

luxary

only few

responsibility
is vile
vast hands are deep

in poverty

With
turmoil

  into another day
steal and fend for family

Trying survive
While the news

just more head-reels to run
another story

wailing excitement and it's just for show
the vast hands are deep in sorrow
but the lifted ones are for others

to never know


Wench what recalled or maybe even tried

That horrid and terrible
they distort the masses reality

on how they are conditioned


 If you could just listen closer
Be humane to the other
It all be much better
but we want shock & terror

endurance/in times
murder is the how the papers fly
  never understood why
(was joy ever watching us)

that maybe it was for laughs

 as cynical joke


and it's so distant but true
won't save a state
that was rightfully theirs
will be ignored
(was time ever in our hands)

 

They distort our morals

to ravage their negelegence

outside creating more terror


what sells

I found this out on TV screen

don't believe and network

will always try to create 

something out of nothing

 

If only the world could cry loud and strong
Then maybe we turn see what the other sees

And push beyond royal treatment
To it's discarded streets
Of the years of diluting morality
all our nakama
It all be much better

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