It would be spent loving all of you
who has meant the world to me.
I would clasp your hands in mine and never let go till it was time.
Sooth your soul..
Be strong..
Tell you worthy stories that you can hold.
For every generation down the line.
There you would remain
in my soul.
I would smile and make you laugh..
Tell you all the things that matter.
Stolen moments,
hurried days.
Rich and sweet
love left buried deep.
Cherished steps..
Remembered what is left
Love..
Only love in me.
For all of you,
This hour.
Author notes
#1 Prompt
if you had only one hour to live?
A contest entry
- What would you do if...? by LovelyLauren.
1400 points, ended March 31, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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What a beautiful take on the prompt!
"It would be spent loving all of you
who has meant the world to me."
That is just beautiful. You had me hooked from the beginning.
Lauren
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Thank you
Lauren,
Thanks so much:~)
I'm glad you liked this..it was easy really.
Also a pleasure to enter
another one of your contest.
Thanks.
Take care
Love Peace
campanaro
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wow
it's beautiful,and excellent use of the prompt..very soft and loving..top favorite of mine from you!..
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Thank you
I'm so very glad you liked it bro.
I appreciate all your kind words and the time
you take to be supportive.
Thanks again my friend.
Take care
As always
Love Peace
campanaro
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This is so amazing Sis. So emotional and heartfelt. Good luck in the contest. Love you!
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Thank you
I'm so glad you liked it sis.
I appreciate the thoughtful comments.
Thanks again.
Take care
Love Peace
campanaro
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This is lovely and wise! Pam
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Thank you
I really appreciate the kind words my friend.
I also appreciate you stopping by,.
Thanks:~)
As always
Love Peace
campanaro
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