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Ol' Mrs. Hick

The late Mrs. Hick said she hated
Those who led lives dissipated
And though her sneers looked legit
She was a hypocrite-
Her autopsy showed she was sedated!


Author notes

Definitions (just in case):
Dissipated- unrestrained by convention or morality
Sedated- under the influence of a sedative drug

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  • BearWoman gold member
    March 24

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    Cute! Thank you for including the definition of dissipated that you did. I had assumed you were using a different meaning (spread thinly). Your use makes the poem richer.