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emptiness bleeding into a return to the normality of a somewhat-dampened crestfallen nature

Ah, what splendid dreams we've dreamt
that we, with waking, do lament
the splendour we had held so dear
we've nary found whilst waking here...

Author notes

simply a kind of response to songs like "Last Night I Dreamt That Somebody Loved Me," by which the dreamer wishes to have not partaken in such horrid wakefulness.

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