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Yummy

Nothing but sweets
will exist,
in ten years.

No more horrid 

cavities,
no more fears.

Dental promises

of heaven,
in 2019.

 

And I will live

everyday,

like it's Halloween!

 

My house will be

made of crunchy,

tasty, all bran.

 

And I will be

married to a,

gingerbread-man!

 

 

 

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I like candy

A contest entry

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  • laurel
    July 4
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    ha.. this was cute =)
    i like candy as well.
    good write =)


  • Dark Otter
    March 24
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    Cute and funny!

    I like the concept of the gingerbread-man. Thank you for the entry.