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Voyeur

 

 

I walk over to your house at five every morning,

just in time to watch you slip out of your night gown.

Your gorgeous body naked in front of me,

is something that I just can't get enough of.

 

You walk over to your bedroom closet,

and carefully select a red dress for the day.

You slowly remove it from the hanger,

then stand and model in front of the mirror.

 

Placing the dress back on the hanger,

you drape it across your queen size bed.

You stretch a little and then walk over to the bathroom.

Since you live alone, you always leave the door wide open.

 

I slowly follow and hide behind your chest of drawers.

You step into the shower and start to wash yourself.

I love it when you pick up the bar of soap,

and work it all over your beautiful body.

 

You lather it into your little hands,

and massage it all over your voluptuous breasts.

I love to listen to you purr and moan,

as your hands move down to your dripping mound.

 

Tempted to reach out and touch you,

I unzip my pants and start to stroke myself.

I feel the mist and heat envelope my body,

as you start to rub your ass in front of me.

 

As you rinse yourself off you start to reach,

for the shampoo right beside you.

You add just the right amount into your palm,

then rub it around in your hands.

 

I love to watch your gorgeous body,

as the water falls like rain all over you.

Your long brown hair is always so silky and fine,

smelling like jasmine and wildflowers in the field.

 

You always take an extra ten minutes,

to just stand there and relax in the water.

Again you begin to rub your breasts,

then thrust your fingers in and out of your mound.

 

As you start to move faster it excites me,

and I in turn stroke in time with you.

I can feel myself starting to climax as I stand here.

Your eyes look up to the ceiling as you start to scream.

 

I watch your juices flow onto your hand,

as my orgasm finally hits me.

You give yourself another good rinse,

then turn off the shower and carefully step out.

 

As you throw your towel over your head,

I quietly slip out of the bathroom.

Hidden by the rising smoke that continuously fills it.

I carefully make my way back into your bedroom.

 

I take my position behind the chest of drawers.

I hear you hum a romantic tune as you walk in.

You remove the towel from your fresh smelling body,

and throw it on the floor next to my feet.

 

You slowly slip on your lacy red panties,

and a matching bra hanging from your doorknob.

Then comes that beautiful red dress that you picked out.

I love the way that it just falls onto your body.

 

You turn on your radio and sit down,

then carefully apply your make up to your face.

I watch as you fumble through your collection,

searching for the right brand and color.

 

As you apply your lipstick you reach over,

and grab a bottle of perfume from a drawer.

You spray all over yourself from head to toe.

The smell of it just drives me crazy over and over again.

 

Next you wipe your desk and put everything away.

Then reach for your purse sitting on the floor.

I watch you as you walk over to the chest of drawers,

the ones that I am quietly hiding behind.

 

You pick up your keys and throw them up in the air.

As you turn around to catch it I inhale your scent

now stronger than ever as you stand before me.

You walk out of your bedroom and head toward the front door.

 

I follow you and as you open it,

I blow you a kiss and wish you a wonderful day.

I quietly walk to your balcony like I do everyday,

and walk down the emergency staircase unnoticed.

 

As I walk back home, thoughts of you enter my mind.

I smile knowing that tomorrow will be another day.

But for now I get to go home and think back,

on this beautiful and lustful morning that I had with you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Prompt: Lust

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 4

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    Erotic Desires Reading List ~

    Congratulations on the Honourable Mention

    While this is a little longer than I normally like to read I found it engaging, sensually hot and a little perverted at the same time

    With that said, I do have to say the use of the word 'ass' in this line: "... as you start to rub your ass in front of me." disrupts this somewhat for me ... it flows so sensually dispite the spying touch but then 'ass' seems unsettling for this - however that is just my opinion so feel free to ignore!


    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    August 25

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    Sooooooo wickedly passionate and downright HOT!!!
    Whew!
    The steam sure is rising this morning!
    Well done, me friend!
    All the best to you!


  • Desire gold member
    July 23
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    Holy Mother of Pearl Jam!

    Drops jaw
    Oy!!

    Wow!!
    What an Image You have prepared on the platter my Friend
    and I must say-
    Singed my eyelashes~

    Had to turn the FAN up so HIGH
    that it short circuited the wires

    I stopped counting how many walls I walked into
    Excellente~ Yep! Yep!
    Okies-...
    I think my monitor melted

    Congratulations on Your HM!
    -throws confetti-
    Woot~

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Best wishes in all You do
    with love & light~ Desire~*~





  • I walk over to your house at five every morning,

    just in time to watch you slip out of your night gown.

    Your gorgeous body naked in front of me,

    is something that I just can't get enough of.




    You walk over to your bedroom closet,

    and carefully select a red dress for the day.

    You slowly remove it from the hanger,

    then stand and model in front of the mirror.




    Placing the dress back on the hanger,

    you drape it across your queen size bed.

    You stretch a little and then walk over to the bathroom.

    Since you live alone, you always leave the door wide open.




    I slowly follow and hide behind your chest of drawers.

    You step into the shower and start to wash yourself.

    I love it when you pick up the bar of soap,

    and work it all over your beautiful body.




    You lather it into your little hands,

    and massage it all over your voluptuous breasts.

    I love to listen to you purr and moan,

    as your hands move down to your dripping mound.




    Tempted to reach out and touch you,

    I unzip my pants and start to stroke myself.

    I feel the mist and heat envelope my body,

    as you start to rub your ass in front of me.




    As you rinse yourself off you start to reach,

    for the shampoo right beside you.

    You add just the right amount into your palm,

    then rub it around in your hands.




    I love to watch your gorgeous body,

    as the water falls like rain all over you.

    Your long brown hair is always so silky and fine,

    smelling like jasmine and wildflowers in the field.



    You always take an extra ten minutes,

    to just stand there and relax in the water.

    Again you begin to rub your breasts,

    then thrust your fingers in and out of your mound.




    As you start to move faster it excites me,

    and I in turn stroke in time with you.

    I can feel myself starting to climax as I stand here.

    Your eyes look up to the ceiling as you start to scream.




    I watch your juices flow onto your hand,

    as my orgasm finally hits me.

    You give yourself another good rinse,

    then turn off the shower and carefully step out.




    As you throw your towel over your head,

    I quietly slip out of the bathroom.

    Hidden by the rising smoke that continuously fills it.

    I carefully make my way back into your bedroom.




    I take my position behind the chest of drawers.

    I hear you hum a romantic tune as you walk in.

    You remove the towel from your fresh smelling body,

    and throw it on the floor next to my feet.




    You slowly slip on your lacy red panties,

    and a matching bra hanging from your doorknob.

    Then comes that beautiful red dress that you picked out.

    I love the way that it just falls onto your body.




    You turn on your radio and sit down,

    then carefully apply your make up to your face.

    I watch as you fumble through your collection,

    searching for the right brand and color.




    As you apply your lipstick you reach over,

    and grab a bottle of perfume from a drawer.

    You spray all over yourself from head to toe.

    The smell of it just drives me crazy over and over again.




    Next you wipe your desk and put everything away.

    Then reach for your purse sitting on the floor.

    I watch you as you walk over to the chest of drawers,

    the ones that I am quietly hiding behind.



    You pick up your keys and throw them up in the air.

    As you turn around to catch it I inhale your scent

    now stronger than ever as you stand before me.

    You walk out of your bedroom and head toward the front door.



    I follow you and as you open it,

    I blow you a kiss and wish you a wonderful day.

    I quietly walk to your balcony like I do everyday,

    and walk down the emergency staircase unnoticed.




    As I walk back home, thoughts of you enter my mind.

    I smile knowing that tomorrow will be another day.

    But for now I get to go home and think back,

    on this beautiful and lustful morni

    i love this poem man u can go

  • HOT HOT HOT

    indeed....Good luck in the contest


    Mistress Passions

  • Wow so hot!!!!! You have me blushing like school girl that was so great



    The Positives:

    that was amazing I love the imagery I liked the feeling deep in my gut as well.

    Room For Improvement:
    Nothing I can see you did wonderful



    My Favorite Part:
    As you apply your lipstick you reach over,

    and grab a bottle of perfume from a drawer.

    You spray all over yourself from head to toe.

    The smell of it just drives me crazy over and over again.




    Next you wipe your desk and put everything away.

    Then reach for your purse sitting on the floor.

    I watch you as you walk over to the chest of drawers,

    the ones that I am quietly hiding behind.


    That was so sexy!
    Overall:

    I give this an 9/10 you did great. I hope to see you in my future contests thanks so much for entering.

    ~*~Apathetic Poison~*~

  • piccola silver member
    April 21

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    sounds like she knows someone's watching so she puts on quite a show


  • trekkergirl
    April 17

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    I have read this one before. If I remember right I called you a peeking tom... and told you that you could be arrested for that type of thing. Anyway, this is definitely a sensual write. And as usual I do like your writings. Thanks for sharing this with us.

  • Thank you for your entry.


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    March 29

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    Thank you for your entry.

    An interesting piece. Quite a full on hot tale here! Your words created vivid, fantastic images in my mind and made me consider the lustful side of being a stalking voyeur

    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck
    Shari

  • Very, very erotic and so alluring and enticing. Well written. I enjoyed every minute of it. Your words so vividly describes every beautiful moment.


  • trekkergirl
    March 28
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    I don't know about lust at all... put I'd call you a peeking tom... beautifully exotic write that you have here. Great job as always thanks for sharing this with us.

  • Wow...do we really know our neighbor...I would award you gold...


  • LittleMoon silver member
    March 24
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    Wow, you can get arrested for that you know!!!! That definately is lust. Sheila


  • hotchocolate gold member
    March 23

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    Hee Hee!!! I was wondering if you were going to enter this! Your ass is a little freak LOL! I love this and good luck in the contest hon


  • Dragonbabyx3
    March 23

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    hrmmmm you kinda scared me on this one! your not spying on me at 5 in the morning are you? lol Its a beautiful write hun, although a bit freaky.


  • Tylers Baby
    March 23
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    very nice job

  • You prev. I knew you was like that.

    Nice. lol

  • this is pervertly delicious shit why you didnt invite me to fucken indulge i have a lil penis to but its called a clit lmao this poem is a riot

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