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If I could find you now

if i could find you

i would tell you how i feel

 

if i could find you

i would take all the of your love

 

if i could find you

i would hold you close

 

if i could find you

i would never let you go

 

if i could find you

i would give you all my love

 

if i could find you

i would be all you ever wished

 

if i could only find you

i would know true love

 

if only i could find some one to love me...

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i don't know why i wrote this, it just flowed from, me like cold clear water. hope you like it

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  • Bella Cullen
    July 27
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    Stop looking. Stop searching and that someone will come to you. Sadly i an still trying to stop my search as well. I know some would say follow your own advise but many do not understand how hard it is to follow your own advise. It is hard to find a good person to be there and to love you especially if you have been hurt so many times before but eventually that goes away and you find that special someone. Or it is more like they find you. very wonderful write. Keep up the wonderful work.


  • Wynd Arc
    March 24
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    This is a very good write and the flow is good. Keep up the good work Void.


  • Angierie
    March 23

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    I do like it
    I love the repetition. I do that a lot too
    Thanks!!!