oh my love
you have abandoned me
you have abandoned me
in the midst of spring
a butterfly so fragile
in a life not long enough
A contest entry
- ... Tanka ... by yukitosumi.
1500 points, ended April 14, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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how very sad. thank you for sharing with me today and i wish you luck in this contest you have entered. viyanna rosemarie
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Thank you...
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wonderful
the last lines are outstanding. 'in a life not long enough,'...gorgeous!! good luck w/the contest though i'm not sure you'll need any luck whatsoever!!
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Thanks a bunch!!!
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beautiful and sad. There are many things in this world so beautiful and yet short-lived. Perhaps that is the essence of their beauty?
Thank you for this heart-felt poem.
Best,
Y and S
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Thank you so much for your kind comment. I appreciate it.
Don
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ahh, there is poetic beauty and a thought to guide us all... fragile, and precious...PK
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Thanks PK....
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Super
Really nailed this one Don! I have missed your absence.
bj
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Thanks so much... I appreciate your comment very much!
Don
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