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Descending Clouds

Descending clouds
Ascending earth
Nothing can explain this
Not even after re-birth

This is the one place
Where heaven and earth meet
This is the one place
Where life misses not a single beat

Is it the water
Or it is the sky!
Juncture of the two
Which the evil tries to pry!

The evil tries to pry
The centre of all earth
Without knowing they will cry
Alone in their end as everyone expresses mirth!

Author notes

This poetry is based on a picture i took of Dal Lake, Kashmir - Heaven on earth... the Heaven that is today unfortunately turned to Hell...

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  • fathom me
    March 23

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    Ya.. It is a complete waste and a tragedy.. Too bad traveling there again is not the same..
    Each time I come here. you have something even better to offer than the last *smile* Keep writing *smile* It's awesome!


    • DarkWarrior
      March 23
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      i know... i felt so horrible when i went there... the people there are so sweet... troubled... its heart breaking...