A basement full of emptiness,
sad desolate greenhouse,
stacked to memories,
wait in fear,
cadence impulses.
Everything blank,
no parameters or embers vector,
shut down with the arrival of darkness.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: Transcendence
A contest entry
- Morning Quickness by Cerulean Sunrise.
550 points, ended March 23, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gold III by Salty Hibiscus.
400 points, ended April 7, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Pre-Writes by Heroesrox.
400 points, ended June 15, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hopefully waiting for your precious comments
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Nice write. Congrats on the Gold. I wish I felt clear transcendence from the bleak, depressing picture you painted.
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very deep.... good take on the prompt thanks for sharing this with us. Good luck in the contest. Love reading your work as always.
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sigh...
nice -
This is really deep. Good luck.
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a nice take on the promt good luck inthe contest
maralisa
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