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I feel love

Hungry piece it was a bit

I admit

Though not current any more

Darling

I feel good

Yes so good

Having you

So smiling

Yes all is fine here

Yes I know

We gonna make it real

Soon

Yes soon

I’ll touch you

wonderful

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 4

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    The beauty of the love and its feelings are wonderfully shared in the words of so warm poetry..well done and thanks for sharing..


  • individuality gold member
    March 23

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    a good piece of poetry, to touch and smile and dance with love's beauty, shining the light in the heart and revealing scent.