Drunk on shadows; lost inside.
Make me real; not waiting on suicide.
Pretend to be a friend, a foe to angels in the sky.
They'll only let you down.
We're not connected to your world.
Watch us live; to decay in our pride.
Was it you, who told me angels could fly?
The only true thing I know, is they die and it's inspiring.
In cold blood, hate and I taste sweet sorrow, expiring.
No time, not waiting on tomorrow and it doesn't excite me.
Breathe me in, my soul's here to keep or to borrow.
The devil purchaised the best part of me.
Do you want me; the demons want me to be,
the greatest martyr they've seen.
Im stronger on fire.
Im flame and sores.
Do you love me Father?
Should I endure more ;
is faith worth the truth.
Lies bleed from the hands and feet of a jew.
I don't make sense to you.
thats the point.
I don't get you either.
The bible was written by crackheads.
Talking snakes, forbidden fruit.
I'll taste whatever I want.
Crucify eve's cunt then smoke a blunt.
Castrate adam, make him bleed for 7 days.
Burn Eden down. Ashes, ashes all around.
Evacuate the healthy. leave the sickening.
Angels where gas masks to breathe in me.
Eternity waits for the best of us.
My best of course, is being fucked, hiding in the darkness.
Fiery wallpaper, burns me less all the time.
Flesh and shame interwine.
Revive my idle mind.
Love me Father, bleed for me.
I've always been what you've wanted me to be.
Forsaken me. I'd only terrorize your kingdom.
Leave me where I fell and call it freedom.
Tell me what you think. If you dont like it. Suck it. =]
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I absolutly love these lines 'No time, not waiting on tomorrow and it doesn't excite me.
Breathe me in, my soul's here to keep or to borrow' I thought that bit was awesome, and the way you ended it was done really well to. I can imagine that some people will read this and go ' OH MY' and run around like it effects them and that thought just makes me laugh haha awesome wording, nice and powerful.
Laura.
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Thanks alot for the comment. yes some people have told me this poem sucked, that i was going to hell. Life's hard, for everyone. This life just may be my hell. =]
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haha, awesome.. iv ehad people tell me they will pray for my soul 0.o either way, keep writing and keep pissing people off ;D
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This is kinda choppy but most of the lines are just fantastic. I think if you played with this a little it would be great..But you dont really care I know I can read..I enjoyed this..in my twisted way!
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