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I waterfall

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I waterfall
into the rainbow light
tears cascading.
As I weep blood
and our unborn child.

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Picture by ~ Anna Razumovskaya

I'm wondering if the meaning of this is clear. It's a subject so close to my heart that I'm afraid that others might not understand what is clear to me.

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  • How deeply sad and so creatively penned. Thank you for your entry... x


  • GotLilt
    March 23
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    How sad Very unique take.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    March 23

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    Great thoughts for this prompt!
    I wish you well with it in this contest.
    Good luck to you!




    Jeremy0826