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The Scientist of the Universe

You adorned the earth in verdancy
Crowning the sky with the sapphire blue tiara

Separating the light from the dark

You made the hopeful mornings

And the mysterious dark nights

 

The ravens do not sow or reap

Neither do they have storerooms or barns

Yet they are fed everyday by you

The lilies do not labour

Neither do they spin their clothes

Yet they are splendidly clothed by you

 

You moulded the world into a rare masterpiece

Carving a wonder out of nothingness

The sequences of the human genome have been decoded

But the handiwork of your creation

Makes us forget the science of reasoning

 

Oh my lord,You are truly the architect of life

The inventor of existence

The omnipotent,omniscient scientist of the universe...

 

 

24th "March" 2009

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2006-2009 Rinzu Susan Rajan

Author notes

REFERENCES:-

THE HOLY BIBLE
LUKE CHAPTER 12

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  • JToddUnderhill
    November 9
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    Yeah.....

    ..... yet one more awesome entry into this contest. Love the subject and the ending was great!


  • Swan song gold member
    September 1
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    a wonderful poem of praise well done


  • Isi
    June 23
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    This is a lovely tribute to the "Scientist of the Universe". I must admit that the first stanza is my favourite, and particularly the second line, it creates a very special image.

    Unfortunately I will have to disqualify the poem from the contest seeing as the rules were not followed.

    Best of luck in your other contests.


  • MelissahhMidnite
    June 6

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    i like this, especially
    "The ravens do not sow or reap

    Neither do they have storerooms or barns

    Yet they are fed everyday by you

    The lilies do not labour

    Neither do they spin their clothes

    Yet they are splendidly clothed by you"

    thanks for entering


  • Heva Feva
    June 5
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    Good luck and thanks for entering my contest.
    -heva


  • My Last Breath.x
    May 27

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    Judge's Verdict

    I really like the words you chose to use in the poem, but it kind of felt like you left it up short with that last stanza.

    Favourite Line
    You moulded the world into a rare masterpiece
    Carving a wonder out of nothingness

  • Beautiful Irony
    May 10
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    This is a great write, and I enjoyed it very much. Great message, there. Well done, keep writing!


  • Umi Juvariel
    April 9

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    Great poem to God here. It was peaceful and rang with true emotions. I really enjoyed it. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    April 7

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    A wonderfully and beautifully expressed piece of poetry
    Loved it!
    Thank you for being part of this contest! All the best to you!


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    April 6

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    Ah..what a praise you did ..Indeed a master piece you submitted..thank you so much for this work for my contest..well done...


  • tears.of.silence
    April 5
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    Lovely. I liked this poem a lot. It really spoke volumes here. I am going to say on the wow fact, I give a 25. So for a three poem total you have a 93. You have been added to the finalist list. Thank you for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. Kahy


  • Samantha Marie
    April 3
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    This is AMAZING. I'm speechless. Thank you for entering!


  • BonnieQ silver member
    March 28

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    The Great Scientist!

    God is the GREAT everything! Scientist, Physician, Psychiatrist, Preacher, FATHER. He's got it all and from Him only the best and accurate things are learned. This is a fantastic write, Susan, and definitely a winner!

    Much luv & hugs, BonnieQ


  • Blue-Rose Beauty
    March 28
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    Very nice.

  • Judith Chandler
    March 25
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    Beautifully expressed write.

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