if i ever fall in love with a guy like you
i would
love him
cherish him
embrace him
kiss him
touch him
make him mine
but i doubt i would never do those things to another guy
because
im so in love with you
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Written February 29th, 2004
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I like the faithfulness in this poem. Great job!
-J. -
I really like this, short, strong, simple and sweet - this is a great poem.
Beck
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i love this. i'm going to comment on everything of yous cuz you're sooo cool. i love the way you write from your heart! my fav part is
but i doubt i would never do those things to another guy
because
im so in love with you
great! -
thank you very much
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that was good. I like the short simplicity of it all. And the point you were trying to make came through very well. Good job.
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thanx a bunch
T0XIIK -
Very short and VERY good. I dont think that it could have been any better than this. It is very sweet and so true.
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thank you
T0XIIK -
aww..simple and cute..i loved it.
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thanx, i think i could of done better, but that was what i was feeling
T0XIIK -
this is good very sweet
Edited on Feb 29, 8:16 p.m. because ''.
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