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VIII Glory

Adoring thy glorious veils

Unfold  before my eyes

Artemis! Mistress

Oh, Thou beauteous archer

Demoniac visions flood

My innermost domains forthwith

Amid hot blooded lava

Awaiting anxiously

To consume, even

My very own soul

In the abomination

Of madness.

 

Author notes

Daemon, Demon is not upplying to the Christian Satan

but to a Genious being.

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  • individuality gold member
    April 11

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    ah madness, it catches us all by surprise sometimes and we scream and we pull and push but still the demon laughs at us - a good poem.


  • albymyheart gold member
    March 23

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    Well I really do like this. Such a powerful write and full of emotion. I'm not sure who Artemis is because I don't know mythology, but I can still appreciate the feeling of this write...alby


  • Denerica silver member
    March 23
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    Erupting words! Felt everything brought to the imagination...well written. Blessings.


  • campanaro silver member
    March 23

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    Interesting and brilliantly written

    Once again you penned your brilliance and captured
    the page..
    Talented my friend.
    Best
    Love Peace
    campanaro