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Mauve-u-lous

Our love is perfectly mauve-


lilac scented comfort duets us in a ecstatic symphony,

swirled with lavender-tinged hopeful existence,

equally married to the gray resentful duties,

dipped in blue disappointment from mouth to ear.


Our love is perfectly mauve-


None of the destroying passion of magenta,

Moistening agony of effectual orange,

Or the violently vile violet of heart bruising.

Broken, aching desperate of olive need not be added.


Our love is perfectly mauve-

Beautiful and plain, and joyful and sad.
Our love is perfectly wonderful with it's imperfections
Our love is constantly stable in it's unstable-ness

We are, as a pair, mauve-u-lous!





 

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Melissa- Mauve...

thanks this was fun!

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  • rinzurajan
    April 1

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    it was written with a lot of detailing...the emotions were truly painted in hues of mauve...



    Good luck


    • AllOuta
      April 3
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      Thanks~ I always thought that mauve was one of the most fluctuating colors on the spectrum. It's so many different shades of so many different colors, and it's never really in balance. I love it!


  • Cailley
    March 31
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    the way your poem reads is beautiful, i love it!
    Good luck


  • Hetha gold member
    March 23

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    I'm very impressed with this. You truly connected different colors and emotions with great focus and relevance. I would like to read more from you, this is splendid! Good luck in the contest.

    ~Hetha


    • AllOuta
      March 24
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      Aww thanks! If you need more of me, you know where I am! lol

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