I stare at her with wonder.
Who really is she?
She's not pretty.
She's not ugly either.
She's just... her.
But...
Something seems wrong,
I see a glimmer of hope in her eyes,
Too quickly replaced by a tear.
She may look ordinary,
Yet I get the feeling,
She’s so complex inside.
All the shattered pieces of her,
All the sadness,
Just floating around in her mind.
This theory is making my brain spin.
Truthfully?
I'm just sick of wondering.
Sick of staring at her.
So I turn away from the mirror.
And forget I tried to look behind broken eyes.
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Sometimes, I can't help but wonder..
Thoughts? Comments? Ideas?
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Good job on this one Carrie.. ..
*hugs you* ...
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this is amazing! I may not know you personaly but from all the things Justin says, and the pictures he's shown me, in this poem you're selling yourself short. You are beautiful! I know the feeling of being broken inside, but always remember; "For every girl with a broken heart, there's a boy with a glue gun."
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.. Gotta say I've never heard that one before.. But i like it. Thanks for the comment. <3
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touching
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aawww babes is this about yourself? you are a BEAUTIFUL young lady who deserves so much happiness! you have so many people who care about you hon! I LOVE YOU! <3
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I am not sure of the story behind this, but rest assured darling, I see a wonderful young lady that is beautiful inside and out! You are amazing, and that is why Justin loves you sooooooo much!
Great job on this one!
and love
Mom
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