Weekend shenanigans
Unchained adolescence
Saturday night ritual
Didn’t mellow or age
86 proof immaturity
Shots of amber delight
Empty bottles strewn
Amongst the fallen
Persevere to be
The last above the table
Nine shot knock down
Decades later
Just the smell
Stomach clenches
In remembrance
A contest entry
- Wasabi Peas and A Dry Martini by Dalaney.
1000 points, ended March 27, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please critique
Comments
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i swear, i turn green if i even get a small whiff of tequila
lol Thank you for entering my contest 
I particularly liked the line:"Didn’t mellow or age 86 proof immaturity..."
love, lane
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Niiiicee
You already know how I feel!! Love the subliminals and flow of themes. The title ROCKS!!!
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