They stood facing each-><-other
Him, t.r.e.m.b.l.i.n.g with RAGE
Her, as c_a_l_m as possible.
The words,
p
o
u
r
e
d
out of his mouth.
"Your an ice cold heartless b***h with no feelings"
Each word h'i't't'i'n'g her like [daggers]
She s t r u g g l e d to keep the PAIN off her face
She replied her voice but a w*h*i*s*p*e*r
"Just because you can't see something,
doesn't mean it's not there"
Author notes
Okay, im not too sure about the title. Um from a personal experience. Had a fight with a friend of mine. If you have any suggestions I would be glad to hear them! Please tell me if there is any spelling errors.
Tell me what you think.
Comments
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so sad and deep. i loved the way you wrote it in dirty pretty. but i love how the last line isn't. it shows how much the person was hurting. but overall i loved the poem.
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oOo I like this. Youre really good at putting emphasis on words at the right time.
I really really like this one =)
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i would ask who this is about but maybe you'll tell me later on
um ... nice effect with the letter separation haha um your words go into detail
and yeah maybe your title doesnt quite go on what the poem is saying but nice write anyway
xo -
i was the first to read this !!!!
I stole the original (>0<) hehehe...mwah ha ha ha
I like it.../
But i like the original better. Without the dirty pretty.
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox
dirty pretty is still kewl thou. !!!!
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