Jasmine

the garden's jasmine
brings to my heart and soul
your essence ...
lingering at my fingertips
the love we shared last eve'

A contest entry

... Tanka ... by yukitosumi. 1500 points, ended April 14, 31 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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ScarletO
April 19
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Wonderful!!!
yukitosumi
April 14
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WWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOO!
- haikumonk
  April 14
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  Thanks so much!!! I deeply appreciate the honor!
Draig aine
April 10
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CONGRADULATIONS ON THE silver
I can smell the jasmine, feel the reverie of passion , stnning
- haikumonk
  April 11
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  Thanks a ton!!! Very much appreciated...
  
  Don
  
  ps... it actually won Gold but something went wrong with Kevin's program. They finally got it straight.
Viyanna Rosemarie
April 6

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beautiful!!!! thank you for sharing with me today and i wish you luck in this contest you have entered. viyanna rosemarie
- haikumonk
  April 6
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  Thank you very much. I appreciate all your visits today.
yukitosumi
March 23

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This was wonderful. I loved it. Wouldn't change a thing! Kono tanka wa arigatou gozaimasu!!!

*sigh* = The optimum reaction for a good tanka.

Thanks again!
Y and S
- haikumonk
  March 23
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  Thank you very, very much. I appreciate your time and comment. Don
Peteskid
March 23
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So nice this middle line of verse...wonderful images here...PK
- haikumonk
  March 23
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  Thanks PK... much appreciated.
Naughtygrlred
March 22
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beautifull
- haikumonk
  March 23
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  Thank you so much!