Limitless minds
being limited
fermented in stupidity.
Lessons learned
untaught and rewritten.
Infinite dreams
shattered
turned into nightmares.
Freespirits
locked up
and extinguished.
True freedom is
an illusion
we're all lost
in the confusion
forgotten the cost
of the lies
and the made up lives.
The ideals that you have
manufactured in a lab.
Humanity is displaced
because faith is misplaced
we should all be disgraced
because we've all made mistakes.
But its time to make changes
and free our minds from these cages
realize there is no god that can save us
to believe so is outrageous.
I don't claim to have the answers
just my opinion that
religion is a cancer
wars waged over faith
preaching love
practicing hate.
Persecuting non believers
like we have a sickness
Why?
because we're capable
of rational thought
religion is'nt faith
because your beliefs must be taught.
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niiiice!!!!
your bang on bud, i fuckin loved this.
every word true, and a class finish it slows it down and makes that undeniable point. im not anti christ. Fuck no!
but rational thought, exactley and personally i dont think its rational to think so highly of oneself or the human species. and erm yeh i cud go on. lol.
nice write and good subject.
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this was reall really good, fuckin awesome write, keep it up
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This piece was another strong poem in this contest. It really feels like the message is being conveyed in a positive way. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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"realize there is no god that can save us
to believe so is outrageous."
Very true.
"religion is a cancer
wars waged over faith
preaching love
practicing hate."
Wonderfully written! Really great piece here.
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I don't necessarily agree with the opinion of the piece, but I like the way in which it's written. I like the overall sentiment, that we have to stop fighting each other in the name of religion. Good luck in the contest.
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excellent write. precise in its glorious truthsmacking across the face of ignorance.
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