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Possibilities

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If you asked me, I'd say:
There is no more than what seems.

How could there be,
When you think of walls before you dream?

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  • fathom me
    March 23

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    I think your poem is quite eloquent as it is! On an emotional note though, I guess you are right.. one often needs more than straight answers to have the courage to dream.. Not everyone has the ability to retain in consistently.. I like your poem's brevity. Thank you.. And how are you my friend?


  • Zayra Yves
    March 23

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    Yes, the world of dreams and the world of reality often overlap in ways that we forget because we imagine there is a difference. Thank you for reminding me.