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Half Gallon

Her eyes blood shot as
slurred and flammable
words slip through the
thickness of a carnal binge
"Your life is contagious"

Feeling the world spin
all I managed were
tearful and empty words
"I love you"

We both had to laugh

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prompt: Contagious

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  • Meroza
    March 31

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    Very interesting write. You took that prompt well, and the ending made it more of a humor poem then a dark one.

    Good luck.


  • maralisa silver member
    March 22
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    aw a nice take on the promt good luckin the contestmaralisa


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    March 22
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    "carnal binge"... nice!! Cool take!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    March 22
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    best o the luck to ya