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Don't Cry for Me.

The rain falls as I close my eyes for the last time.
Don't cry for me, just remember me.
Don't blame the driver for he did not mean to kill me.
As I fly away, don't cry for me.
Remember the good times as I fade away.
Don't cry for me.

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  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    August 19, 2009

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    Sad but also very forgiving. That you would think of the careless driver at such a defining moment. It is very altruistic. Most would harbor revenge or at least anger. It's also self-less in that she wants no one to be sad at her passing. I like that.


  • TwiztidMaggot
    August 8, 2009

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    This is a pretty good piece. I like how you wrote it. Keep up your great work! And btw, thanks for the comment on my poem.

    TwiztidMaggot


  • Symphony
    August 5, 2009

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    i quite like this; while it's short, and not particularly filled with imagery ... it's swift, and concise - just like death itself - and somewhat reassuring also. nice job


  • Nephlim
    August 5, 2009

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    I like how this is from the fading victim's point of view. ^-^

    No bitterness, just relief, a little remorse. Wonderful!