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[ The face I treasure ]

The face I treasure
seems to fade away
dissolving into bittersweet memories
pieces of my heart stolen
lost among kisses and revelry
the want of your touch
warmth of your perfect smile
shining in this darkness
a beacon for my soul
constant reminders as I drift to sleep
the only time i find
to recall my past love
long before it slipped away from me
as if it were grains of sand
trickling through cracks between my fingers

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  • Puppydog gold member
    March 22

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    DEEPLY TOUCHING!!!!!!

    Oh how those memories still stay with me also, especially one lady, but choices were made and time moved on But yes, the memories do remain and during the night come strong but slide slowly away as like you so eloquently say like grains of sand. 's


    • Sunburst
      March 23
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      thank you so much. it is a very painful thing, but it really does always stay with you