Time
No beginning
No ending
forever can be seen.
Holding hands
during midnight walks.
Forever,
that is what you want
that is what I need
One hour,
One minute,
One second
of every day
It's that perfect moment
nothing else matters
for it is yours
then,
now,
forever.
Author notes
prompt take me to the end of forever I think I ended up with like 44 words
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Comments
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this one is really good i could not stopp reading it once i put it down thanks for sharing keep up the great work
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great. I don't know what else to say. It takes me to infinity ... where no man has gone before
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I think we all need a forever to open up our hearts and ignite our souls. Beautifully wrote, very expressive.
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It seems like an ephemeral sort of forever. Nicely done!
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I love the prompt you were given and I think you nailed it. very good
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Nice one trekker
short and pointed on forever Like this alot
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Good take on prompt keep up the good work x
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Nicely written
Good luck in the contests. 
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It's that perfect moment
nothing else matters
for it is yours
then,
now,
forever.
great write!!!
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thumbs up
good write. good read
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aw a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest
maralisa
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beautiful write beautiful sentiment,
thank you for playing
however you did go over the 20-30 words....
Tasha
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I do have a very bad habit of doing that... just don't know when to quit when I get started.
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sometimes it just needs to keep flowing
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