In the dark of the night
There he goes again with her
And to think he was my knight.
I met him there on that nonstop flight,
Him in his tailored suit, the entrepreneur,
In the dark of the night.
I'm not sure why but it just felt right.
This was something I never thought could occur
And to think he was instantly my knight.
For many year we went without a fight
And then it started all in a blur,
In the dark of the night.
I guess he did it out of spite.
I can't think of anything else he'd do it for
And to think I thought he was my knight.
And now here I go away from his sight.
I left before he thought I'd stir,
In the dark of the night
And to think he used to be my knight.
What Do You Think?
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a good form the villanelle, and though it is not required for this form i think having a beat like iambic p helps the flow. the way i tend to look at that is use 10 syllables per line, or if you want you can go for eight per line, either way the presentation will look good and it will flow much better when reading. i hope i have been of some help for your english class.
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thanks
I tried to to iambic p but it's a lot harder than I thought it would be. She wanted it though... And most of my sylabbles are between 7 and ten I'm not quite sure what she is looking for really but thanks I might change it up a little
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