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Eradication of The society

A land of once peaceful and colorful pride.
Now a cold dark and plagued filled acreage.
Ice and cold swarm all  around freezing all.
familys collapsing from the arctic weather.
Black death roams with through out the area.
Affecting everyone still breathing.
Extreme sufferage seizes the kingdom.
Warrior fighting the dark spirits of the night.
Demons punish all for there sins.
The longer life is the more amplified the punishment.
Dread flurishes farther and farther.
Day by day the horror burst with emtremities.
Where is there god  for savor they scream.
The agony intensifies greater and greater.
Ultimately the citizenry are dead and gone.
The demons and dark spirits free roam.
Destruction chokes the life out of more societies.

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  • Devine.identity
    November 14
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    well this certainly made me think of the words you used and what vision you were trying to get across.
    But I came up with my own vision a prison gate opening and the world being unsafe for travel.
    Excellent choice in words!

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